Comments on: Interview with the Sonnet

By: Steve Mackin

Steve Mackin — Sat, 22 Dec 2007 19:10:32 +0000

Sonnetude – quality or condition or degree of the sonnet, sonnetness. I’m not sure if that’s the right name for her. How about Sonnetella, She of the sonnet? Merry Christmas and a snappy blue beer!

By: Alicia (AE)

Alicia (AE) — Sat, 22 Dec 2007 08:24:14 +0000

Thanks for these nifty sonnets in conversation with sonnetude….
Another, by EA Robinson
The master and the slave go hand in hand,
Though touch be lost. The poet is a slave,
And there be kings do sorrowfully crave
The joyance that a scullion may command.
But, ah, the sonnet-slave must understand
The mission of his bondage, or the grave
May clasp his bones, or ever he shall save
The perfect word that is the poet’s wand!
The sonnet is a crown, whereof the rhymes
Are for Thought’s purest gold the jewel-stones;
But shapes and echoes that are never done
Will haunt the workshop, as regret sometimes
Will bring with human yearning to sad thrones
The crash of battles that are never won.
I especially love the octave–Sonnet Mastery=Sonnet Slavery, and vice versa, as further elaborated in Ange’s recent post on the Malice of the Sonnet.

By: Mary Meriam

Mary Meriam — Fri, 21 Dec 2007 03:44:12 +0000

I can neither forget nor resist, Don. That is one helluva good one. Here’s a “beacon bright” sonnet in response.
The Market-Place
BY WALTER DE LA MARE
My mind is like a clamorous market-place.
All day in wind, rain, sun, its babel wells;
Voice answering to voice in tumult swells.
Chaffering and laughing, pushing for a place,
My thoughts haste on, gay, strange, poor, simple, base;
This one buys dust, and that a bauble sells:
But none to any scrutiny hints or tells
The haunting secrets hidden in each sad face.
The clamour quietens when the dark draws near;
Strange looms the earth in twilight of the West,
Lonely with one sweet star serene and clear,
Dwelling, when all this place is hushed to rest,
On vacant stall, gold, refuse, worst and best,
Abandoned utterly in haste and fear.
Correct spacing can be seen here:
http://www.poetryfoundation.org/archive/poem.html?id=177822

By: Don Share

Don Share — Thu, 20 Dec 2007 11:14:52 +0000

And who can resist this sonnet to end all sonnets by E.A. Robinson?
Sonnet
Oh for a poet—for a beacon bright
To rift this changeless glimmer of dead gray;
To spirit back the Muses, long astray,
And flush Parnassus with a newer light;
To put these little sonnet-men to flight
Who fashion, in a shrewd mechanic way,
Songs without souls, that flicker for a day,
To vanish in irrevocable night.
What does it mean, this barren age of ours?
Here are the men, the women, and the flowers,
The seasons, and the sunset, as before.
What does it mean? Shall there not one arise
To wrench one banner from the western skies,
And mark it with his name forevermore?

By: Don Share

Don Share — Wed, 19 Dec 2007 13:53:53 +0000

And who can forget the immortal “Sonnet,” by Edwin Arlington Robinson?
Sonnet
Oh for a poet—for a beacon bright
To rift this changless glimmer of dead gray;
To spirit back the Muses, long astray,
And flush Parnassus with a newer light;
To put these little sonnet-men to flight
Who fashion, in a shrewd mechanic way,
Songs without souls, that flicker for a day,
To vanish in irrevocable night.
What does it mean, this barren age of ours?
Here are the men, the women, and the flowers,
The seasons, and the sunset, as before.
What does it mean? Shall there not one arise
To wrench one banner from the western skies,
And mark it with his name forevermore?

By: Steve Mackin

Steve Mackin — Sat, 15 Dec 2007 19:49:20 +0000

Okay, that’s all, only the three, I promise. These are all sonnets, two playing with the rules in different ways (thank you Robert Lowell), but sonnets none the less, and all recent. Rules! What good is a rhythm unless you syncopate it? What good is the key unless you add that one note to create that unique chord, those chords of longing? Just wanted to show that the sonnet good bad or indifferent is very much alive and thriving at the center of my practice. And why doesn’t it surprise me that the Sonnet speaks with an Italian accent?!
On the other side of the window
the crab-claw crawl of easting clouds
spun north and scudded straight at me
filling the sky above the muddy
green horizon of the Park.
The sky grew old. The sky grew dark.
The air grew thick, and rubbing skin
the hair became electricity
and fingers delivered boldly charges,
then windows rattled under wind tossed rains.
Last night I heard a story of
a fisherman who stirred a sea;
What Prospero disturbed this cauldron
into this reality?

By: Steve Mackin

Steve Mackin — Sat, 15 Dec 2007 19:36:32 +0000

An otter eats sea urchin.
It loves it above all other food.
Watch an otter wrap itself
in broad leaves of kelp,
bob on the sea upon its back
to crack spiny urchin upon a rock
it laid upon its belly:
if it was human I’d say it’s rapture
lighting its saucer eyed whisker face.
Once I thought I’d an affinity with otters,
but then I ate uni
and felt I’d licked
the rotting bottom of the sea,
and now the otter is foreign to me.
SPM

By: Steve Mackin

Steve Mackin — Sat, 15 Dec 2007 19:31:33 +0000

I seek terrains by Paul Cezanne,
and tremble under Van Gogh’s moon.
I see a god by Paul Gaughin
as red Picassos fill the room.
A girl, white with bright red lips,
stands snared in ivy that is blue.
She sings a lullaby to ships
that makes the starry sky change hue.
There is a white shark in the garden.
What drove it from the woven seas?
There is a Dali in the garden.
Pluck its gypsy eyes like posies.
Be cautious of its mouth of thorns.
Like the mid-wife, pay heed to bees.
SPM

By: Mary Meriam

Mary Meriam — Fri, 14 Dec 2007 16:55:41 +0000

Pardon my undignified response – LOL!!!
I had a chance to interview Ms. Sonnet myself (this is from several years ago), and here’s what she told me:
I’m scared of my own life. I should be dead,
not sonnetizing morning, noon, and night,
upsetting avant-guardians, well-fed,
able to smile and even laugh, eyesight
and teeth intact. Or could it be I died
and found a second wind? One thing I know,
my death was very close—it was inside
of me, beginning funeral plans. My slow
return took centuries to understand.
It seems I’m back, though still a bit unsure
of what to do, because I hadn’t planned
to last this long. Sometimes I take a tour
of every happy humming poem part
and bless my little feet and every fart.