Rain on Tin

By Rodney Jones b. 1950 Rodney Jones
If I ever get over the bodies of women, I am going to think of the rain,
of waiting under the eaves of an old house
at that moment
when it takes a form like fog.
It makes the mountain vanish.
Then the smell of rain, which is the smell of the earth a plow turns up,
only condensed and refined.
Almost fifty years since thunder rolled
and the nerves woke like secret agents under the skin.
Brazil is where I wanted to live.
The border is not far from here.
Lonely and grateful would be my way to end,
and something for the pain please,
a little purity to sand the rough edges,
a slow downpour from the Dark Ages,
a drizzle from the Pleistocene.
As I dream of the rain’s long body,
I will eliminate from mind all the qualities that rain deletes
and then I will be primed to study rain’s power,
the first drops lightly hallowing,
but now and again a great gallop of the horse of rain
or an explosion of orange-green light.
A simple radiance, it requires no discipline.
Before I knew women, I knew the lonely pleasures of rain.
The mist and then the clearing.
I will listen where the lightning thrills the rooster up a willow,
and my whole life flowing
until I have no choice, only the rain,
and I step into it.

“Rain on Tin” from Salvation Blues: One Hundred Poems, 1985-2005 by Rodney Jones, published by Mariner Books in 2007.

Source: Salvation Blues: One Hundred Poems 1985-2005 (Mariner Books, 2007)

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Poet Rodney Jones b. 1950

POET’S REGION U.S., Southern

Subjects Relationships, Love, Nature, Weather

Poetic Terms Free Verse