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Studies in Scale

Excerpts from The Gorgeous Nothings

by Jen Bervin and Emily Dickinson

The following portfolio represents a small selection of works from The Gorgeous Nothings: Emily Dickinson’s Envelope Poems (Christine Burgin /New Directions in association with Granary Books, 2013). The “gorgeous nothings” is an excerpt from Emily Dickinson’s manuscript A 821; in choosing it as the title for this project with Marta Werner, I was thinking of Dickinson’s own definition for nothing in a letter: “By homely | gifts and | hindered Words | The human | heart is told | Of nothing – | ‘Nothing’ is | the force | That renovates | the World – ” and her definition for no: “the wildest | word we consign | to Language.” These “gorgeous nothings” are that kind of nothing.

These manuscripts are sometimes still referred to as “scraps” within 
Dickinson scholarship. Rather, one might think of them as the sort of “small fabric” Dickinson writes of in one corner of the large 
envelope interior, A 636 /636a: “Excuse | Emily and | her Atoms | The North | Star is | of small | fabric | but it | implies | much | presides | yet.” The writing is small in relation to the compositional space, floating in its firmament. This poem exemplifies Dickinson’s relationship to scale so perfectly. When we say small, we often mean less. When Dickinson says small, she means fabric, Atoms, the North Star.

The concept of the “atom” emerges in ancient Greek philosophy as the idea of the smallest hypothetical body. At the outset of the nineteenth century, modern atomic theory recasts the atom in chemical terms. In 1830 Emily Dickinson is born in Amherst, Massachusetts. She is thirty-four years old when the Civil War ends and Johann Josef Loschmidt first measures the size of a molecule of air. In the range of philosophic, scientific, and popular definitions for atom in the Oxford English Dictionary, we also find a dust mote, the smallest medieval measure of time, “the twinkling of an eye,” and this apt, obsolete meaning too: “At home.”

This enigmatic poet who signs letters “Jumbo” or “Your ‘Rascal’” or “Your Scholar” is petite by physical standards, but vast by all others. “My little Force explodes –” she writes to her future editor, Thomas Wentworth Higginson, in 1862 during a stretch when she is writing on average three hundred poems a year. Emily Dickinson, one of the greatest American poets, wrote approximately 1,800 distinct poems within 2,357 poem drafts and at least 1,150 letters and prose fragments — a total of  3,507 pieces before her death at the age of fifty-five. On the triangular flap of the envelope seal A 252, we find this fleeting message inscribed in lines winnowing down to a single word at the tip: “In this short Life | that only [merely] lasts an hour | How much – how | little – is | within our | power.”

Dickinson’s writing materials might best be described as epistolary. Everything she wrote — poems, letters, and drafts, in fascicles, on folios, individual sheets, envelopes, and fragments — was predominantly composed on plain, machine-made stationery. “Preserve the backs of old letters to write upon,” wrote Lydia Maria Child in The Frugal Housewife, a book Dickinson’s father obtained for her mother when Emily was born. It opens: “The true economy of housekeeping is simply the art of gathering up all the fragments, so that nothing be lost. I mean fragments of time as well as materials.” Dickinson’s envelope writings convey a sense of New England thrift and her relationship to the larger household economy of paper, but they also disclose private spaces within that household: the line “we should respect | the seals of | others – ” inscribed next to the gummed seal of A 842 resounds.

Dickinson’s poems and correspondence attest to the considerable care she gave to the ritual act of opening a letter. These envelopes have been opened well beyond the point needed to merely extract a letter; they have been torn, cut, and opened out completely flat, rendered into new shapes. To understand how forcefully Dickinson is manipulating the form of the page itself, take a simple household envelope and see how many of these forms you can re-create. You will quickly find that what looks simple, simply is not. There is not one instance here of an envelope reopened out into its die-cut shape. Look with care: what may look like a whole envelope is only one face of it, slit open. Where do those cuts fall and what shape do they prefigure when the space is opened out? How are some cut edges so surgically clean? At Amherst College Library, Margaret Dakin has 
acquired what is believed to be Emily Dickinson’s lap desk; its painted wooden surface is positively riddled with myriad fine cuts. Though the written compositions may show considerable speed of thought and hand, Dickinson was not blindly grabbing scraps in a rush of inspiration, as is most often supposed, but rather reaching for writing surfaces that were most likely collected and cut in advance, prepared for the velocity of mind.

When Dickinson approached her compositional space to write, she was reading and responding to her materials, angling the page to write in concert with the light rule and laid lines in the paper, using internal surface divisions, such as overlapping planes of paper, to compose in a number of directional fields. Sometimes Dickinson’s writing fills the space of the envelope like water in a vessel or funnels into the triangular shape of the flap. Often she invents columns, typically two, to further divide the space, demonstrating a propensity to break poem lines shorter and shorter. She draws additional line segments or arcs to further divide the compositional space. One would think that such a space would feel carved up, crammed, but it doesn’t. The page feels bigger yet, as if there has been an insertion of space.

“These manuscripts should be understood as visual productions,” writes Susan Howe in The Birth-mark.

In assembling The Gorgeous Nothings we were guided by this 
directive and specifically selected work that foregrounds Dickinson’s experiments with visual form and variants on the page. We have 
favored this understanding in our presentation of manuscript facsimiles; in the book, each is reproduced actual size, front and back, accompanied by a transcription. The gathering of manuscripts there presents all the works composed on envelopes or postal wrappers that Marta Werner has been able to trace to date. The envelope writings are not a series or discrete body of works. Each envelope has its own complex constellation of affiliations with manuscript drafts that one can trace through sources. These envelopes, spanning the years 1864 through 1886, are culled from 1,414 contemporaneous poem drafts and 887 letter drafts.

We often gauge a writer’s intentions by her published work, or by work she submitted for publication during her lifetime, but Dickinson offers no such certainties. Dickinson rejected print publication of her poems. In a letter to Higginson, she explains:

I smile when you suggest that I delay “to publish” — that being foreign to my thought, as Firmament to Fin. —
     If fame belonged to me, I could not escape her — if she did not, the longest day would pass me on the chase — and the approbation of my Dog, would forsake me — then — My Barefoot-Rank is better —

Yet she was not secretive about the fact that she was writing poems; she sent more than three hundred poems to recipients in letters — letters that were often indistinguishable from poetry.

In Black Riders: The Visible Language of Modernism, Jerome McGann writes, “Dickinson’s scripts cannot be read as if they were ‘printer’s copy’ manuscripts, or as if they were composed with an eye toward some state beyond their handcrafted textual condition.” 
He continues,

Emily Dickinson’s poetry was not written for a print medium, even though it was written in an age of print. When we come to edit her work for bookish presentation, therefore, we must accommodate our typographical conventions to her work, not the other way round.

Throughout the late nineteenth and twentieth centuries, editors have painstakingly brought that work to the public for the most part 
“the other way round.” Even in the most trusted scholarly editions, editors have restructured Dickinson’s poems for print in opposition to the manuscripts, consistently overriding her line breaks, systematically deconstructing (or in reading editions, omitting) her formal construction of variant words and punctuation. Without manuscripts present, the reader cannot know how those editorial omissions and decisions have affected meaning.

Dickinson’s manuscripts themselves, and the forms and experiments borne out in them, are the most authentic register of her intentions. Of the 3,507 poems, letters, drafts, and fragments Dickinson wrote, approximately a third of the manuscripts have been published in facsimile thus far. The first substantial view of these appeared in 1981 in The Manuscript Books of Emily Dickinson: A Facsimile Edition, two volumes that include 1,147 poem facsimiles — the “fascicles,” forty discrete packets of poems Dickinson assembled and tied with a stitch, as well as unbound sets. In 1995 Marta Werner published a new array of strikingly different visionary late works — forty manuscripts in Emily Dickinson’s Open Folios: Scenes of Reading, Surfaces of Writing — followed in 2007 by Radical Scatters: Emily Dickinson’s Late Fragments and Related Texts, 1870–1886, an extensive digital 
archive bringing forth one hundred and thirty-two more manuscripts. Werner’s pioneering diplomatic transcriptions were the first to accurately reflect Dickinson’s manuscripts typographically in book form.

To represent a Dickinson poem accurately in print, to “accommodate our typographic conventions to her work,” is quite a demanding task. Dickinson’s manipulation of textual space is elastic in the manuscripts: her sprawling headlong letterforms, ambiguous capitalization, gestural punctuation, scale shifts in variant words, extremely short lines, and expansive spatial placement of words on the page trouble even a visually-minded transcription. These new transcriptions were created with the aim of a clean, legible text to act as a key into — not a replacement for — the manuscripts. If our interpretation of  Dickinson’s script errs, each manuscript is present to make its own determinations and ambiguities known.

The Century Gothic transcription offers readers a typographic “map” to consult while reading the manuscript facsimile. Dickinson’s upper- and lower-case letterforms, punctuation, and markings are expressive and open to multiple readings. The typographic interpretation reflects our scholarly engagement with her scribal practice but in no way claims definitiveness, given such ambiguities. The size of the transcriptions — 50% relative to the envelopes — reflects our belief that Dickinson’s manuscript is the primary space to read her work and is the highest authority on all questions. Though it is finally impossible to represent all the spatial dynamics of Dickinson’s handwritten documents, attempts were made (using InDesign) to reflect them through placement, kerning, leading, spacing, and type-point size within the line drawing of the envelope. Ultimately, it was our hope to keep the transcriptions as legible as possible, and gesture back toward the “bright Orthography” of Dickinson’s manuscripts.

Dickinson’s early manuscripts are predominantly written in ink; from 1864 to 1865 they are mostly in pencil, and thereafter both pen and pencil are used until the year 1878, when “the pen is almost entirely discarded.” All of the envelope poems are written in pencil. Unlike a fountain pen, a pencil stub, especially a very small one, fits neatly, at the ready, in the pocket of a dress. In an early letter to her brother, Austin, she wrote “This is truly extempore, Austin — I have no notes in my pocket,” suggesting that there were typically jottings accumulating there. Dickinson’s one surviving dress has a large external pocket on the right side, where her hand would fall easily at rest. The economy of the pocket is worth considering. An envelope is a pocket. An envelope refolds discreetly, privately, even after it has been sliced completely open. Emily Dickinson sent this minuscule two-inch-long pencil (pictured below) in a letter to the Bowles, 
“If it had no pencil, | Would it try mine – ” wryly nudging them to write. It was enveloped in a letter folded into thirds horizontally, pinned closed at each side.

 


 

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Originally Published: November 1, 2013

COMMENTS (1)

On January 6, 2014 at 1:49am Jesse Glass wrote:
Dear Poetry Magazine,

Re: The gorgeous Nothings

I like Jan Bevin and other artists finding permission in the fascicles and other of ED’s written fragments to make their creative work--that's always a plus. On the other hand, scholarship requires proof rather than mere assertion, no matter how authoritatively given. Marta Werner asserts that ED’s words and the material on which they are written create a meaningful engagement, design, etc., and that this material somehow reinforces, completes, extends, both the meaning and purpose of those inscriptions. That is the assertion that I question.

There are two points that an historical researcher must keep in mind when dealing with artifacts, written or other: 1) one cannot commit a basic fallacy in logic and that is Whiggery or the historian's fallacy--looking back on material from an earlier time through the cultural glasses of the 20th and 21st centuries and projecting our present understanding and concerns on the material from that earlier time, and 2) forgetting that often the simplest explanation is the most correct. As for the first assumption, Marta Werner uses the term “collage” to describe the first artifact (A-821) that she discusses. This is misleading because it implies all that the word collage carries with it from our understanding of 20th century art and seems to suggest that ED was intentionally creating a "collage" in the same manner that modernist artists of the 20th and present centuries did and do, when clearly this is not the case. But this is just the first of the assumptions she makes without the evidence to support her assertions. I also question the implication that Ed's visual sophistication in terms of text and design is so inchoate, (as in the "This is a bird and This is a house--see it?" interpretation offered by Marta) when the sophistication of ED's texts and all historical documents relating to her life show her to be quite other than rudimentary in everything she did. In fact I find this reading of ED's drafts and "idea papers"--a real disservice to the ED we know--a wordsmith who read widely, thought deeply, and was exposed daily to the advertisements, word tangles, riddles, puns, anagrams, rebuses, puzzles, etc. presented in 19th century newspapers--the great common source for the dynamic interplay between word and design, as Willard Bohn tells us in his studies of Visual poetry--for poet/artists a generation or more after ED's death. To begin to understand Dickinson's concept of the visual use of words, I would suggest that one go back and take a good look at the newspapers she read, and particularly the adverts for patent medicines and other items. Begin with those. Dickinson's visual sense could not help but have been informally trained--as was many other artists'--by being exposed to those newspapers all of her life, beginning in the 1830's and stretching through the 1880's. Of course Quarles’ allegorical designs and other books of signets, symbols, patterns and hieroglyphs were familiar to her. As we know, Dickinson was an avid reader of books and magazines with a ready store at hand in the libraries of colleges and bookstores and lending libraries of her time and place, and no doubt she knew of illuminated manuscripts, and saw many examples of the use of words in design, so I would suggest that her visual sense was probably just about as sophisticated as her use of language. Perhaps a "house-shaped envelope" with a piece of paper pulled out "like a chimney" is a tad condescending to the ED we see from historical documents and from a knowledge of the real sophistication of her work.

From the first "collage" (A-821)--and Marta is making unwarranted assumptions in using that word to describe the artifact, to the last—and, to me, most interesting example of “envelope poem”—the Western Union telegram, there's no evidence that these texts are any more than the worksheets and the more fragmentary "idea sheets" of a wordsmith of a very high order.

If Marta Werner has created a prose poem in celebration of words written upon recycled envelopes by Emily Dickinson, then her work is gratefully acknowledged for what it is; if, however, her commentary is meant to be taken as scholarship, then please take these observations as a sincere suggestion of a possible way to begin to document ED’s real understanding of the visual use of words.

Every Best Wish,

Jesse Glass

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A visual artist and a writer, Bervin earned a BFA in studio art from the School of the Art Institute of Chicago and an MA in English, creative writing, and poetry from the University of Denver. Her artists books have been published in limited editions and online; they present collaborations between the written word and her interpretations as a visual artist. She has worked with textiles and erasures, creating from, and with, . . .

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